Lanivet Community Primary School

"Review of the BFG film" By Daniel W, Age 5, Class 2

2009-09-29T12:19:00.005+01:00

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Review of the BFG film

I like the BFG film because the BFG drinks Wizz Pop & goes Wizz pop, wizz bang and flies all over the place. And my favourite bit is when he picks Sophie out of her bedroom window in his hand. And my other favourite bit is when he jumps off the cliff and he flies to his big giant home. When Sophie makes the BFG cry the big evil giant comes. I like when they go to the Queen and I like it when they tell the Queen there's nasty giants. They want the Queen to bring the soldiers and army to defeat the evil giants. Then all the baddy giants got killed and one survives and he comes to the cave where the giants got dead and they attack him. And it's my favourite DVD.

By Daniel W, Age 5, Class 2

(as dictated to parent helper)
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"Wedding Day" by Jessica W, Age 7, Class 2

2009-05-27T14:20:00.006+01:00

Wedding Day

On Sunday 20th of September it is my second cousin’s wedding.

Me and my cousin are bridesmaids. We are going to wear peachy white dresses. Theodora also has bought me a tiara and some shoes. We are going to hold flowers when we walk up the aisle.

I am excited because I’m her bridesmaid.

By Jessica W
Age 7, Class 2

"Food" by Jessica W, Age 7, Class 2

2009-03-24T09:39:00.004Z

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FOOD

SARDINES.
TOFFEE ,TANGERINES,TURNIPS.
RASPBERRIES.
APPLES.
WEETABIX, WEETOS.
BANANAS.
EGGS.
RASPBERRY.
RAISINS.
YOGURTS.

By Jessica W
Age 7
Class 2

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"The Adventure Kids" by Connor M, Age 7, Class 2

2009-02-28T18:31:00.000Z

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The Adventure Kids

One morning the Adventure Kids went outside to play with Erin’s bubbles. Erin blew a big bubble, it hit the ground and in a few minutes it burst. Magic liquid splattered all over them. In three seconds all three of them were standing in the middle of a prehistoric world.
“Wow,” gasped Hollie.
“We are in a dinosaur time,” said Erin.
Connor stared at the sky. A massive shape was looming over them. Hollie screamed when a big old beak came and nipped hold of her and lifted her off the ground.
“Hollie!” shouted Connor, “ Drop her down, you stinking bird.”
The bird took no notice of him and in fact Connor noticed it was not a bird, it was a Pteredon. The Pteredon flew off into the distance towards the mountains.
Connor fell to the ground and said,” What have I done? It was my fault that Hollie got caught.”
“ We have to go and find her,” said Erin.
Connor got up and they started running towards a massive jungle.

By Connor M
Age 7
Class 2

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"Magic" by Faye H, Age 9, Class 3

2009-02-15T14:12:00.008Z

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MAGIC

M..is for magic

A..is for Aladdin

G..is for genies

I.. is for impressive

C..is for certificate of magic

By Faye H

Age 9

Class 3

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"My Surprise Party" by Jessica W, Age 7, Class 2

2009-01-07T15:14:00.004Z

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MY SURPRISE PARTY

It was my birthday.
I thought everybody forgot.

But.....
when I went to my room everybody
said HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

By Jessica W
Age 7
Class 2

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Christmas Eve by Mia H, Class 3

2009-01-03T21:35:00.005Z

On Christmas Eve I was playing in my bedroom then I heard some bells. I said it was Father Christmas. I looked out the window, nothing was there so I went downstairs and went outside. There was Father Christmas but there was no reindeers, then a pig was flying, I was all worrid but I woke up and there I was lying in bed I quickly went downstairs
I unwrapped my present and it was a flying pig. I screamed.

"Snow-women" by Jessica W, Age 7, Class 2

2008-12-10T12:05:00.002Z

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Snow-women

The snow falls down from the sky.
You can make snow-women.
Your hands will be as cold as snow.
Your hands will be blue.

By Jessica W
Age 7
Class 2
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"Unusual Christmas Presents" by Krazy Blue Kreators

2008-12-05T10:23:00.003Z

Starting with the line - ‘On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw...’- the Krazy Blue Kreators wrote about unusual Christmas presents they imagined receiving.

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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a key with a little box. I opened it gently with the key. I saw nothing so I shut it up again and then I looked in the box that it was in and there was a note. I started to read it.
It said: ‘If you will want to be a star and be famous open the box and say - I am poor let me be rich can you come and save me?’
I scrunched up my face with confusion. I thought well I can try it. I turned the card the other way.
It also said: ‘If you don’t then you will be even more poor than before. Beware you might be a little painful. (Remember you have to do it to become really rich.)’
I thought: should I? Yeah I should. I opened it and repeated the words and then I got punched in the face. So I punched the creature back and pinned him down. I won! The creature disappeared and I became really rich. Yeah!
By Jade F
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a viper and there was a big rock worm called Onix. He was grey.
By Craig B
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a vampire! He had scary fangs and had scary blood dripping down.
By Abbie
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a big slimy muddy puddle. I put my finger in it. I tasted it and it was chocolate. But it had a light brown bit. I tasted it. It tasted of toffee and cream with toffee caramel centre.
By Mia Jade H
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One Christmas day I opened all my pressies when I found one present in the corner. I went over and opened it when then all of a sudden I just saw a pair of eyes staring at me! I screamed and all of a sudden a hand came out and grabbed me into the box!!! I went into another world. Then I only realised I was in a wood and in the wood there was loads of eyes staring at me. My Mum was wondering where I was. I was screaming and I was hungry and thirsty. When I went threw the woods I saw loads of hands going and grabbing me. Then I walked back and fell on the floor and my Mum asked me where I’d been. I said I was in my room playing.
By Megan T
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a fountain of doors. It was shooting doors out and I had to choose a door.
As I went in the fifth door all was silent and all was dark. Then I went closer into the door. A light went on and more lights came on. An ugly monster came in and with force it locked the door with me in it.
The monster had thousands of knives and the first knife he took he tried to kill me but I kept running. But before I could kill him “beep, beep, beep” my alarm went off. I told my mum but she said it was a dream.
By Kaya S
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a Quail. But not your ordinary Quail, multicoloured Quail and it talks human words. I said, ‘what a neat present’. But the more I played with it the more it talked and it changed colour. Wow! A week later my adventure started but I cannot tell you anymore because IT IS TOP SECRET!
By Charlie GH
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a big Hairy monster. It looked like a big gorilla. It felt hairy. I ran and I ran far away. It was not what I expected! It was a hairy, smelly monster!
By Jessica B
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a Porsche Viper. It had a button that you push when you are sitting on the seat and all the car goes shiny. It is shiny blue and green with fire on. It has spoilers on it.
By Tyrese
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a magic portal to another world which is made of sweets that when you eat them they just grow back. There was a swimming pool made out of chocolate and the water was coke. A beach made of lots of sweets and everything in the world was made of chocolate, jelly beans, coke bottles, marshmallows, cake, ice-cream, gum, fudge and many, many, many, many more!
By Emily N
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a scary remote control shark. It breathes through its head. It is scary and it electrocuted me.
By Callum S
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....an alligator! Its eyes glared at me! I was scared. Its tail flicked at me and I went into the water. I was gone.
By Erin H
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On Christmas morning I unwrapped my present, opened the box and I saw.....a shark tank and mini sharks. One was a Great White. The other was a Hammer Head and the last was a Tiger Shark.
George R
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"War Poems" by the Krazy Blue Kreators

2008-12-03T11:29:00.005Z

The following poems were written by members of the "Krazy Blue Kreators" mid-November. Unfortunately, through no fault of their own, these did not arrive in my inbox until now - hence the delay and them being published in December instead of November.

***Krazy Blues - if any of the following poems are not labelled with the correct author's name - please let me know the correct poem/name asap and I will amend. Katina****

Krazy Blue Kreators War Poems

"War Poem" by Kaya S
People dying because of guns and gas
Men upset waving to their families
Dead bodies lying as red as roses
In the field I see a lot of red and in the field there are dead bodies.
I walk closer and closer and see a slowly growing poppy from the ground
All is silent; it is over; it’s the eleventh day and the eleventh month and eleventh hour.

"The Scary War" by Craig
Red blood dripping when people get hurt,
Grey and green dusty guns.
Dead bodies on the floor,
Bangs of bombs loud
Clothes that are torn.

"Poppies" by Charlie GH
Red poppies
Red as roses
The only flower
Added with things to grow
Poppies start to show
The only thing starts to grow
Across the field they start to show.

"War Poem" by George
Grey, brown, green, black.
Gas and rotten feet
Boom, Boom, KAPOW!
People getting killed, mud, and dead trees.

"War Poem" by Callum
Red is the colour of blood
Black when it is dark
Guns
Machine guns
BANG!
KAPOW!

"War Poem" by Faye H
Green, red, brown, grey, black
Smoke, smelly feet and gas.
BANG! BOOM! AHH! HELP!
Guns, mud, dead people, explosives, machine guns
OMG!!! Scared HELP!
Brown muddy trenches
Smelly eaten away feet.
Dead people’s blood running down bodies.
BANG, BOOM, HELP! HELP!
Explosives going off in a sound of CABOOM!!!Grey helmets, black army suits.

"The War Poem" by Jade F
The colours are green and brown
Some people are dead
Which I really dread.
Dusty smells and gases
Spread all over the war field.
The noises like bang and
Twang, which I hate.
Wailing people dreading death
Gun shots through people’s heads.

"Poem" by Megan
Red blood dripping down people
Bullets
Blood smelling like people’s lungs
Dead bodies laying on the ground
Poppies like red bursting blood

"War Poem" by Brenna
The soldier in green
HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP!
A soldier shooting lonely
He is injured
Someone come and help him.
I think I broke my ankle.
I will care for you,
Back to the hospital
He was badly injured.
I don’t know what to do.
I was worried
I was scared,
HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP!

"War Poem" by Tyrese D
Guts, Blood,
Cold and Old
Scary fireworks
Man playing piano
War crimes solved

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'The Black House' by Hannah N, Age 6, Class 2

2008-10-26T14:27:00.005Z

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The Black House

Once I found myself by a black house.
I went in. I saw a cat.
I went to the kitchen and made a cup of tea.
I sat down with the cat.
I was getting tired so I went to bed.
When I woke up I was in my bed.

By Hannah H
Age 6
Class 2
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'Me and Winnie' by Rebecca C, Age 6, Class 2

2008-10-26T14:11:00.003Z

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Me and Winnie

I met Winnie the witch.
Winnie let me go on her broomstick to go home.
Winnie showed me her house, it is black.
Me and Winnie had tea, so did Wilbur.
Then we went to bed.
The next day I went home.
I was glad to go home.

By Rebecca C
Age 6
Class 2

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'The Daleks Take Over the World' by Connor M, Age 7, Class 2

2008-10-26T14:02:00.002Z

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The Daleks Take Over the World

"Wow " said the Doctor," Real snow".
Martha came out of TARDIS," Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr," said Martha, " It is cold too,"
"Come on," said the Doctor," I think I saw something."
Martha ran to his side.
"What, come on," said the Doctor, they ran around the corner and they saw a Dalek. They heard it say,"Exterminate," and they saw a human cry out, "Ahhhhh!"
Martha shouted,"Nooooo!" and the Dalek turned its eye towards her.
"Don't harm her," said the Doctor.
"This is not a Dalek question," said the Dalek.
"What is your name, I demand to know what is your name?" said the Doctor.
"My name is Dalek Kahn."
"Let us pass," said Martha, "We have to get to the building."
"I don't think so," said the Dalek.
Another human appeared with a machine gun and shot the Dalek, The Dalek exploded.
"Mickey!" smiled the Doctor, "Where did you get that from?"
"From the building," said Mickey.
"Lets go," said Martha and they all ran towards the massive grey stone building...

By Connor M
Age 7
Class 2
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'Harry Potter' by Jessica W, Class 2, Age 6

2008-10-26T13:49:00.004Z

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HARRY POTTER

Once there was a girl called Lailer. She was a cousin to Hermione.

Lailer came to Hogwarts. Hermione was thrilled.

Lailer liked Hogwarts very much. She loved everything. She learned to fly. She learned to put a spell on someone.

At Christmas she had lots of presents.

Then they went home on the train.

THE END.

By Jessica W

Age 6

Class 2

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'Living by the Sea' by Fred H, Age 6, Class 2,

2008-10-26T13:34:00.003Z

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LIVING BY THE SEA

Crashing waves
Thunder very loud
Wind blowing the curtains down
Falling boulders
Very rough night
Rain very rough
Ten metre high waves
Sharks and whales eating other things
Morning rises
Sunny day
Good day to play..

By Fred H
Age 6
Class 2

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'The Daleks Take Over the World' by Keelan D, Age 6, Class 2,

2008-10-26T13:00:00.004Z

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'The Daleks Take Over The World'

The Tardis landed on the pavement. He opened the door then he found a world of Daleks. He even saw Davros.
He didn't let the Daleks win. He got in the Tardis. He saw a red Dalek who tried to exterminate the doctor but he couldn't.
The doctor said 'What is your name?" The doctor said 'I command you to get out of my Tardis!" The Dalek says "I have a laser".
What will the doctor do???????..............

Keelan D
Age 6
Class 2
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'Ethan the Pirate' by Ethan B, Age 5, Class 2,

2008-10-26T12:40:00.003Z

Ethan dictated his story about pirates:

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Ethan The Pirate

Ethan is in his ship. He has two sons. We go to islands to get treasure in our little row boat. We find some treasure. We go back home.

The End

By Ethan B
Age 5
Class 2
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'The Policeman' by Ben W, Age 5, Class 2

2008-10-26T12:33:00.002Z

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Ben dictated his story, adding that his magic key takes him on many adventures and to different worlds:

The Policeman

I turned into a policeman using my magic key.
The man threw dynamite in the policeman's car. Pushing on the detonator the car blew up.
The policeman gets the man.

The End

By Ben W
Age 5
Class 2
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'Lucy and the Witch' by Rebecca C, Age 6, Class 2

2008-10-12T13:04:00.002+01:00

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Lucy and the witch

Once upon a time a little girl called Lucy went outside with Ned, Jade and Jack. They went to the park and played and had so much fun that Lucy forgot the time and it started to get dark.

"I have got to go home now so I'll see you tomorrow".
Lucy ran all the way home but when she went to go inside, the door was locked.
She was locked out.
Then she heard some thing in the shadows. She looked up and there it was, the witch...

From Rebecca C, Class 2, Age6
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A cold dark spooky night.......by Faye H, class 3

2008-10-10T13:36:00.006+01:00

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Cold dark spooky night at school and kaya emily brenna and faye where trapped in the school by a witch and her black rat.

The black rat was running around them as if they where famous stars and he was the body guard.

Then all of a sudden the lights went on and the witch walked in and they all gasped in horror.
'Its the witch,' we all screamed.

We would never say a word well we wouldn't be able to any way.

So then the witch said, 'I will kill you and then eat your guts'.

AHHHHHHH HELP

Then batman and robin smash down the door and saves us all by chucking knives at the witch and that was the end of the witch.

'Thankyou' we all said.
Any way there is lots more crime to stop.

by Faye H, Class 3

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'How to Make A Bat' by Mia H, age 8, class 3

2008-10-10T13:24:00.003+01:00

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How to make a bat

Put slimey eye balls
Put green guts.
And yellow blood.

by Mia H, age 8, class 3

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'Spooky Nights' by Tegan, Age 7, Class 3

2008-10-08T16:58:00.004+01:00

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Spooky Nights

Spooky witches running through your house.
Spiders crawling up your arms.
Spooky noises all around.
Pumpkins lit up on the ground.
Trees rustling outside your window.
Spooky nights!

by Tegan, Age 7, Class 3

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'The Story of the Ghost' by Emily N, Age 9, Class 3

2008-10-08T16:49:00.004+01:00

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The story of the ghost.

It was a cold Saturday night when two 14 year old's got in to our school. They picked up a huge stone and threw it at the window, it cracked but it was still together. On Monday all the school saw the window it was ready to smash. In class 2 where the window was, a kid was getting a book. A stone hit the window it smashed all over the kid. The kid was rushed to hospital but soon died and now haunts the school.

By Emily N, age 9, Class 3
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'Ghostbusters' film review, Daniel W, age 4, Class 1

2008-10-07T18:12:00.004+01:00

Daniel liked the film 'Ghostbusters'. Daniel spoke his review and his Mum wrote down his words. This is what he said:
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I’d like to eat the marshmallow man. The marshmallow man was funny. I liked the ghost bit. I liked when the Ghostbusters fell down the hole. I did like the bit where they sucked up ghosts into the machines. The scary bits were the lion and the fire. The other scary bit was when the policeman switched the ghost machine off. When the ghosts all came out I like that bit as well. The statues cracked and the monsters came out of the statues – it scared me. I liked the bit when the lions bit the man. I liked the bit when the marshmallow man went in half and the city went on fire. When the Ghostbusters went up all those stairs they were tired out. And the other bit that was very, very good was when she turned into a demon.
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by Daniel W, age 4, Class 2

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'Halloween' by Jessica W, Age 6, Class 2

2008-10-02T17:35:00.005+01:00

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HALLOWEEN

Scary is no fun as witches and vampires, spiders, spooky noises,

windows crackling, lights turning off,

zombies smoothing through the sun,

lightning and thunder bashing,

wind blowing the curtains like flashing lightning.

Now its fun.

by Jessica, Age 6, Class 2.

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Krazy Blue Kreators - "Scary Speedy Spider"

2008-10-02T16:54:00.006+01:00

The 'Krazy Blue Kreators' Thursday lunchtime club has written a poem as a group.

The people involved were from Class 3 & 4: Jessica B, Hollie C, Charlie GH, Callum S, Craig B, George R, Mia H, Megan T, Kaya S and Emily N.

They were inspired by the recipe poem written by Moira Andrew (see: Hints.Tips.Inspiration page)

Scary Speedy Spider

Take eight hairy legs,
And eight gooey feet.
Eight thrusting legs,
And four beady eyes.

Add hot red blood,
A metre of white sticky wool,
And two poisonous needles.
Paint with neon colour-changing paint.

Add a red scaly belly,
Lumps of matted balls of hair,
Blue squidgy guts
And the speed of lightning.

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"Have Fun In Summer" by Connor, Age 6, Class2

2008-10-02T09:41:00.005+01:00

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This is my poem that I wrote about summer:

Have Fun in Summer!

Summer is wonderful
Summer is cool!
Summer is the time
To PLAY!!!!!

by Connor M, Age 6, Class 2.
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